Conversations with Kyorai
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[Bashō’s technique in linked-verse demonstrated: by evoking the excitement caused by the blossoming of the cherry tree he gives a most dramatic picture of the arrival of spring in a dark wood.]
Kuromite takaki |
Somber and tall |
Saku hana ni |
In and out |
Bashō
When the former verse was given, I thought how difficult it would be to add a verse about cherry blossoms without destroying the image of the forest of oaks. When I asked the Master to add such a verse, this was how he did it.
Translated by Donald Keene