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36. | ll. 29, 30. | But ev'ry smile, etc.] W. W. writes: 'These two lines are very beautiful. The rest of the poem is hardly above mediocrity, but two such lines do not recompense us for a mass of base matter.' |
l. 33. | too many] to many 1646. | |
37. | Farewell to Love. | |
W. W.'s note is: 'This ode is inferior to none of his writings for nature and simplicity, but it partakes of all their faults.' | ||
l. 1. | Well, shadow'd] Well-shadow'd early edd. | |
ll.11-15. | As he, etc.] Cf. Donne's famous song: 'Go and catch a falling star'; and his Epithalamion for Lord Somerset, 1613, stanza 10: 'As he that sees a star fall, runs apace, And finds a jelly in the place.' Mr. Chambers, in his ed. of Donne (i. 221, 222), cites parallels. For superstitions regarding the origin of star-jelly or witches' butter (Nostoc commune), see Brand, Pop. Antt., iii. 404, 405. | |
ll. 26-30. | See Burton, Anat. Mel., iii., sect. 2, memb. 5, subs. iii. (ed. Shilleto, 1896, iii. 245), for similar methods of curing love by imagination, especially his quotation from Chrysostom. | |
38. | l. 31. | gum] Gun 1646, 1648. |
l. 33. | hair, 't] heart, old edd.; hair, Hazlitt. The right reading is obvious. | |
l. 35. | the hay] See Sir John Davies, Orchestra, 1594, l. 64: 'He taught them Rounds and winding Heyes to tread'; Love's Labour's Lost, V., i. 161, with H. C. Hart's note in Arden ed., 1906; and the 'report' song 'Shall we go dance the hay?' in England's Helicon, 1600 (ed. Bullen, 1899, p. 243). | |
l. 41. | methinks] me think 1658. | |
l. 44. | Checks] Hazlitt; Check, early edd. The metaphor is from hawking: see Twelfth Night, II., v. 125; III., i. 71. | |
ll. 46, 47. | They . . . These] It seems more natural to read These . . . They, and suppose the usual reading to be an accidental transposition of the earlier editors. | |
45. | The Invocation. | |
l. 1. | Cf. The Expostulation, below: 'Ye juster deities, That pity lovers' miseries.' |