Page talk:The Marriage of Heaven and Hell - copy D.djvu/5

Shouldn't this line:

And the original Archangel, or possessor of the command of the Heavenly Host, is calld the Devil or Satan, and his children are called Sin & Death.

be rewritten to read like this:

And the original Archangel or possessor of the command of the heavenly host, is call'd the Devil or Satan and his children are call'd Sin & Death

This change would entail (1) removing a comma, (2) decapitalising "heavenly host," (3) adding an apostrophe, (4) replacing an 'e' with an apostrophe, and (5) removing the period.

This line is not the only one that needs to be corrected.  I mention it merely as an example.

Sincerely,
allixpeeke (talk) 10:30, 9 October 2014 (UTC)