Talk:Lapsus Calami (Aug 1891)/To B. H. H.
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| Information about this edition | |
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| Edition: | Lapsus Calami, August 1891 (4th edition) |
| Source: | Lapsus Calami (4th edition) at Google Books |
| Contributor(s): | sbh |
| Level of progress: | Text complete 
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| Notes: | See below |
The original publication in The Trident is available at Google Books. There are a handful of notable differences.
In the first verse the ninth line reads:
- To one quiet form amid the Babel
The second verse opens:
- Come back: we miss thee. That slow smile
and the ninth line reads
- Else tacking in our midst, and we
The fifth line of the last verse reads:
- Come talk, live, marry, breed, write, sing:
And there is also a comma at the end of the ninth line of the fourth verse ("And trace the rings of fragrant smoke,"). sbh (talk) 08:06, 13 January 2016 (UTC)